Monday, 26 February 2018

26/2/18 - Monday Book Review - Poetry Edition - Killing The Black Dog

Today is a very special day! As it has been eight Mondays since the first post on this blog, it means, it's finally time for the second Poetry Version of Monday Book Reviews!

Today, I will be looking at Les Murray's Killing The Black Dog! I was introduced to this collection on the recommendation of one of my lecturers last semester. A classmate of mine lent it to me during the latter end of the previous semester and I figured it was worth reviewing! 




Killing The Black Dog is a collection of poetry which discusses depression and how it impacts the sufferer. In this book, the pieces which refer to "the black dog" are discussing depression directly. I found the idea of establishing a prominent metaphor interesting and helpful when conducting analysis of individual pieces which I could use for my portfolio at the end of the previous semester.

As someone who does not suffer from depression, I was hesitant when reading this collection, afraid that I would not be able to completely grasp the motifs behind each piece in the book. But I did in fact manage to comprehend the imagery and the depth of the pieces produced, despite not having experienced depression first-hand.

I felt that the voice of this collection was heavy and upfront and I really enjoyed reading the collection itself! It was very interesting! I would totally recommend giving this a shot!

Thank you for reading! See you in two weeks for another instalment of Monday Book Reviews! - Next time, we will be going back to prose! 
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra
-Imogen. L. Smiley

26/2/18 - Monday Book Review - The Great Gatsby

Today, 26/2/18 is the fourth instalment a series of Monday Book Reviews, expressing my personal opinions on works of fiction. Today, I will be looking upon a piece called The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald.


F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby was a text that I originally read during my A-Level Qualifications. I returned to it after re-watching the film and having my distaste toward specific characters reignited, and decided to take advantage of rereading to address and validate an opinion expressed by my former teacher; that this book was one of the best novels ever written. 

I found that there were many aspects to The Great Gatsby which make it a classic piece of literature and a great read - the conflict in Nick Carraway's interests demonstrates how despite intending not to pass judgement on the people who have not had the same opportunities as he has had is ironic as that is what Nick says he is setting out to do on the first page of the book. Throughout, he notes that the characters that surround him are awful and corrupt people being influenced by the grandeur of money. 

I found that one of the most compelling aspects of The Great Gatsby had to be the air of mystery that surrounded Gatsby himself; the idea that people that were classified as New Money could just appear out of nowhere at all and create a name for themselves, just as Gatsby had done, yet his method of managing it had aroused suspicion and he therefore had an impressive reputation surrounding him. Not that the people from West Egg cared enough to steer clear of his parties. 

I found that the way that Fitzgerald wrote the book was incredibly clever, for his work seemed to demonstrate how Nick found himself being corrupted through associating with those he met in New York and the more he dabbled in Gatsby's affair, the more clouded his resolve became. It wasn't until Myrtle Wilson was killed that he seemed to have a somewhat clear perspective on events, and even then he was passing his own judgement on how the situation was handled. 

I feel that this book is very interesting and definitely worth the read! 

Thank you for reading! See you in two weeks for another instalment of Monday Book Reviews! - And because the weeks have overlapped! You're about to get a double wammy! The next post will be a review of poetry collection! I'm so excited! 
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra
-Imogen. L. Smiley

Sunday, 25 February 2018

25/2/18 - Song Of The Week Sunday!

Song Of The Week Sunday:

Today, 25/2/18, is the day of the next instalment of Song Of The Week Sunday - where I will be sharing a piece of music that I listened to more than any other during the space of the previous. In this instance, from week beginning 19/1/18 and ending today, 25/2/18, the song I listened to the most was the following:

Words Fail from Dear Evan Hansen!
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKP9UdIcXFk

This song is one that I happened upon during my ventures in the Musical Theatre side of YouTube in a bid to find lyrics I could analyse for a project I am producing on mental health. This song, Hell, this MUSICAL provided me with everything I possibly needed! I was delighted to have such access.

This song in particular is the song equivalent of a soliloquy, in which Evan discusses his actions with himself, and the audience. The use of metaphors are beautfiul, I particularly adore the one about "slamming on the breaks before [Evan had] even turn[ed] the key". I felt like that image proved to be fruitful for explaining living with social anxiety! And it was a repeated image from an earlier song, 'Waving Through A Window', in which Evan's central conflict with being social is introduced explicitly. The fact that the epitome of the consequences of his actions due to this internal conflict is being conveyed through the same image was immesely powerful!

Kudos to the singer, Ben Platt for the level of emotions conveyed in this piece! It really resonated with me as a listener!


Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!


- Imogen. L. Smiley

Friday, 23 February 2018

23/2/18 - Happy Birthday Floyd Daniels

Today, 23/2/18, is Floyd Alexander Wake-Daniels' 24th Birthday! And in order to celebrate, I decided to post something in his honour!

I remember when I first came across Floyd's character and I didn't have a clue what sort of domino effect would come from his character. He was introduced in the first draft of my novel Neon Blood and was killed off several chapters later. Despite leading such a short life in this early draft, I became enamoured with him and decided to extend his life within the story, by writing a series of chapters to postpone his death.

When I gave the fourth draft of this story to beta-readers, Floyd won the Favourite Character Poll that I had constructed, to see how my characters were being received. He managed to win that poll by four votes; an absolute landslide! From there, the complaints about his murder came flooding in - my readers were greatly upset and conspired that he ought to be resurrected.

I fought against the people's wishes for over a year, but eventually, I decided to re-visit Floyd's character and work out whether it would be plausible for him to survive. From that mere consideration spanned a "cult" following. His spirit animal of a flamingo became the symbol of my social circle whilst at university and his development lead to the reconstruction of the entire series so his entire story could be told. He, out of all of my characters, deserved it!

Out of every character I have ever created, Floyd is my all-time favourite! Everything about him makes him endearing to me as a writer; his intellect and his skills as a tactician, his ability to be self-sacrificing, his sense of loyalty to the promises he once made and his general charisma and exuberance! He has a soft spot in my heart and the hearts of my family and friends! I cannot wait for his story to finally hit the shelves in the years to come.

So happy birthday Floyd!




23/2/18 - Favourite Character Praise Friday! - Ruby Kurosawa

Today, 23/2/18 is the fourth instalment the series of posts praising my all-time favourite characters for their quirks and flaws etc. called Favourite Character Praise Friday. I will be sharing these posts every two weeks to gush about fictional characters in a proactive environment. With this segment, I intend to demonstrate what makes characters great so you and I alike can use these facts to improve our characters!

This I will be tackling the first anime character of the blog and it is a character that up until somewhat recently I really didn't like. But now I adore her!



So who is the subject of my fourth Favourite Character Praise Friday?

Ruby Kurosawa from the Love Live! Franchise


For those who are unfamiliar with the Love Live! Franchise, there are two series' as it currently stands; Love Live! and Love Live! Sunshine! The series' focus on a central character, Honoka Kousaka and Chika Takami, forming school idol groups with students at their schools. Ruby is a character introduced in Love Live Sunshine! she is a first year High School Student at Uranohoshi Girls' Academy, with great interest in school idols, being a fan of Muse, the group Honoka established several years prior in the original series. She is co-erced into joining a new group called Aquors by Chika and her friends in the year above, and from there, the only way is up for Ruby.

Before anybody asks, yes I do in fact play the game, but my account is a third year oshimen, so I barely get any Ruby cards, so I will not be using the game to validate her development, as I do not have enough of her cards.

...So, why do I love Ruby, despite the fact that I used to strongly dislike her?

Warning! There will be spoilers!

In essence, the second season redeemed her character so much in my eyes that I just had to commend her development!

She tended to be in the background, always too meek to assert herself

Ruby was a very quiet character in the first season of Love Live! Sunshine! she was a character that therefore tended to blend into the background when compared to her more outgoing schoolmates, particularly fellow first year, Yoshiko aka Yohane, The Fallen Angel, whose quips and their friend Hanamaru's responses to them tended to summarise the majority of the first year students' interaction that was not plot-orientated. 

HOWEVER, when the second season rolled around, she grew more comfortable amongst her friends, tending to also jab at Yoshiko, and eventually grew to depend on her friends and go out on limbs herself to help others independent of the other characters in Aquors. 

Her main quirk was her immense shyness

When Ruby was introduced as Aqours' token "shy character" my mind immediately looped back to her predecesor, Hanayo Koizumi, who developed at a rate of knots after her best friend Rin, encouraged her to join Muse and pursue her childhood ambition of being an idol, even if it would only be whilst she was in High School. 

Ruby found herself in a similar predicament, being pushed to join Aqours with her friend Hanamaru, but unlike Hanayo, who managed to find herself at the butt of many jokes due to her insecurities about her weight, shyness and love for white rice, the only thing that Ruby could be humoured for was how shy she was. I was originally very worried that her character would be pushed to the sidelines and not receive what the fans of the series referred to as a "development episode". 

HOWEVER, in the second season her character was skyrocketed into a greater level, I was amazed to see that instead of a singular "development episode" the first year students, lead by Ruby, managed to have a completely independent development arc, which focused on them depending on one another to help their fellow School Idol Leah from rival group Saint Snow, after she made a mistake and she and her sister Sarah froze up, and consequently failed to qualify for the finals of the Love Live competition. 

She was too reliant upon her older sister, Dia

At the beginning of the series, Ruby's central dilemma derived from a conflict of interest between her and her older sister, Dia, who had gone off school idols and refused to let Uranohoshi Girls Academy create a school idol group. When Dia's decision was overruled by the chair of the school, her friend and classmate, Mari Ohara, Ruby had the opportunity to join Aquors despite her sister disliking school idols. 

Toward the latter end of the first season of the show, the conflict that caused Dia's opinion to change was resolved. Kanan, a fellow third year student and childhood friend of Dia and Mari, found out that Mari had refused an amazing opportunity to study abroad and refused to tell her friends about it at all because she wanted to be a school idol. Instead, Kanan decided to throw the Love Live Tournament so Mari would cave into the pressures to go abroad and study. When Mari found out that her friends had sacrificed their dreams of dancing together on stage, for Mari's academic career, she was outraged and heartbroken. She sought to right the situation, and in doing so, she Kanan and Dia joined Aqours. 

With Dia now a member of Aquors, that meant that Ruby had access to her crutch; her older sister, who she had always dreamed of being a school idol with. And that factor, along with the previous two lead to making me worry that Ruby may find herself as an underdeveloped character, suffering immensely off-screen once her older sister graduated. 

BUT yet again, the second season gave her redemption for her dependence upon her sister; when Ruby met with Leah, they bonded over how they both believed that they had the superior older sister, arguing passionately about the amazing quirks of the sibling that they felt inferior to. And with Leah and her older sister Sarah now out of the Love Live Tournament, it meant that Sarah would graduate High School on a sombre note, her last performance being influenced by Leah's mistake and their inability to collectively recover from it. 

However, Ruby decided that just because their journey in the competition was over, did not have to mean that their final performance as Saint Snow had to be a sad performance. So instead Leah and Ruby worked along with Hanamaru and Yoshiko to create a stellar performance for the two idol groups for a Christmas Fair in Leah's hometown. 

I found that Ruby seeing her relationship with Dia through Leah and Sarah lead to her developing in leaps and bounds because ultimately she understood what Leah was experiencing. The ideas of no longer wanting to be in Aquors, once the third years graduated and how she didn't want to be the reason Dia might feel negatively about her final performance. 

So, what can we learn about writing characters from how Ruby Kurosawa was developed in Love Live! Sunshine!? 

  1. It is absolutely fine to allow shyer meeker characters to take the spotlight, they have their own thoughts too 
  2. Showing a character overcome something such as their greatly introverted personality and learning how to embrace its can be a great story to tell 
  3. Sometimes characters that you underestimate can further the plot on levels the reader or viewer may not even consider

Thank you for reading my reasons for loving Ruby! I hope my praise influenced the way you perceive your own characters!
Until next time!
And remember: 
Per Ardua Ad Astra! 
- Imogen. L. Smiley


Tuesday, 20 February 2018

20/2/18 - Happy Tuesday! University Inspired Writing Prompt!

Happy Tuesday! University Inspired Writing Prompt!

Today, 20/2/18, is the next instalment of University Inspired Writing Prompts. Since my first year at university, I have been compiling a collection of writing prompts inspired by my time studying in Derby. I hope that these prompts help you create your own works!

All of these prompts are dialogue based, and are inspired by real conversations I have been part of whilst at university.



Prompt Eight:
"Great, thanks to you I have to lock my door and put a salt ring around my bed because the demon in our cellar is in love with me. Why did you do this!" 

This is a quote from my second day living in my current house. We had a friend over, who installed a  ouija board app in order to ask the demon in our cellar whether he was enamoured with any of us. When she got to my friend Jenny, the demon changed their answer to "yes".  And as Jenny's room is on the ground floor, her room is now COVERED in salt! 


Hopefully this prompt inspires something - even if it is just a smile
Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!
- Imogen. L. Smiley

Sunday, 18 February 2018

18/2/18 - Song Of The Week Sunday

Song Of The Week Sunday:

Today, 18/2/18, is the day of the next instalment of Song Of The Week Sunday - where I will be sharing a piece of music that I listened to more than any other during the space of the previous. In this instance, from week beginning 12/1/18 and ending today, 18/2/18, the song I listened to the most was the following:

Battle Scars by Paradise Fears!

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MFaBmcCz_HU

This song has been one that I tend to listen to when working on pieces of work that focus on mental health. Or at least, when I feel that I can handle it. I absolutely love this song. It's very emotive and I tend to get emotional when listening to it.

This week I played it several times, as for homework, I am analysing messages about mental health in music to demonstrate the power of imagery and metaphors to go along with the physical symptoms of an issue. For an assignment I am doing for my coursework, I am writing prose about the experiences of anxiety and the first piece that I chose to start analysing first was this song. It is not as well known as Stressed Out by Twenty One Pilots, and although it's an amazing song, I felt it was better to use lesser known music.

With it being on loop, I felt that this song earned the position of the Song Of The Week!

Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!


- Imogen. L. Smiley