Wednesday, 14 February 2018

14/2/18 - Writing Advice Wednesday

Today, 14/2/18, is the fourth instalment of a new series of posts; Writing Advice Wednesday, where my advice to new writers will be shared once every two weeks. 



It is important to remember that my opinions are not law in any way, shape, or form! Not everyone has the same experiences as I do in this field but it is valuable to share opinions on topics to try and help others!

Today I will be discussing how I write such long pieces of prose. It may seem like a random topic but it is one of the most common questions that I am asked whilst at university "How do you write so much" etc. At the moment, my works of prose have been very long - my current WIP will be a five piece series, the first book currently standing at over eighty thousand words. 

How did I manage it? One word. 

Characters.

I have created so many characters for this series. Admittedly, there are only four central characters in the first book, but that book established the majority of the context before the perspective would shift. For the second book there are nine main characters and an extra eight side characters that have influence on the plot; most of these characters remain as main characters throughout the rest of the series.

With that considered, that means that for the second book I had nine potential plots; every single character has a story that led them to that point - so what are you going to do? You can explore all of them briefly and find out which characters have the most compelling stories that can relate to the prevalent plot thread.

A lecturer of mine once told me that character and plot co-exist, they influence one another and if you are struggling to write enough the issue may be the lack of characters or depth of the pre-existing characters! 

When I initially attempted to work out which characters would get the honour of having a book focusing on their stories, I looked to characters that had complicated backstories and interesting lives that could further the plot! 

Thank you for reading! I hope this helped you in any way, shape or form! 
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra! 
- Imogen. L. Smiley

Tuesday, 13 February 2018

13/2/18 - Happy Tuesday! University Inspired Writing Prompts!

Happy Tuesday! University Inspired Writing Prompt!

Today, 13/2/18, is the next instalment of University Inspired Writing Prompts. Since my first year at university, I have been compiling a collection of writing prompts inspired by my time studying in Derby. I hope that these prompts help you create your own works!

All of these prompts are dialogue based, and are inspired by real conversations I have been part of whilst at university.

Prompt Seven: 
"The date was going well but then I had a coughing fit on the Ferris Wheel"

This is inspired by a quote said by one of my friends as she gave me and my housemates the details of her date at the Christmas Funfair! She had been ill but decided to go on the date regardless, and just as things were getting romantic BAM coughing fit! 

Hopefully this prompt inspires something - even if it is just a smile
Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!
- Imogen. L. Smiley

Monday, 12 February 2018

12/2/18 - Monday Book Review - The White Devil

Today, 12/2/18 is the third instalment a series of Monday Book Reviews, expressing my personal opinions on works of fiction. Today, I will be looking upon a piece called The White Devil by John Webster

I was introduced to this play back when I was at college in 2015, studying Gothic Literature. This play, by Webster is what is known as a Pre-Gothic piece that derived from the Jacobean era. The genre of theatre this piece was classified as was a "revenge tragedy". I was greatly intrigued by what this play would have to offer.

The play focuses on a politically corrupt Rome. The main characters, Bracciano, Duke of Rome and Vittoria Corombona, are having an affair. In order to be together, their spouses, Isabella and Camillo are murdered. The events that surround this create a great spiral of chaos, murders and plots to kill people end up taking place left, right and centre in order to avenge the other characters. It is very interesting!

I will admit now that I became greatly obsessed with this play towards the end of the term when we studied it. I found the characters and their lack of black and white morality fascinating as almost every character went into interactions with anterior motives that the audience would be aware of through dramatic irony.

I reread this piece and found myself completely re-invested in the domino-effect of murders!

I found that the greatest hindrance of the piece would have to be the language, if you are not well versed in older theatre, I would recommend starting off with a different piece of literature as this play plays with a lot of olden Italian phrases as well as language you would find in Shakesperian works. I found this play an amazing one to read, as I spent hours upon end translating essential phrases in the text into modern English in order to memorise them for my exam.
For Example:
Flamineo: Am I your dog?
Flamineo: Am I your bitch?

However, I believe that the reason I enjoyed reading this play as much as I did was for that same reason, because I translated the language and found myself investing myself in the story even more.

All in all, I would 110% recommend this play! Just be sure you know what the characters are saying!

Thank you for reading! See you in two weeks for another instalment of Monday Book Reviews!
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra
-Imogen. L. Smiley

Sunday, 11 February 2018

11/2/18 - Song Of The Week Sunday!

Song Of The Week Sunday:

Today, 11/2/18, is the day of the next instalment of Song Of The Week Sunday - where I will be sharing a piece of music that I listened to more than any other during the space of the previous. In this instance, from week beginning 5/1/18 and ending today, 11/2/18, the song I listened to the most was the following:

Future by Paramore!

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4oScRBsOV6I

I have been a huge fan of Paramore since I was about fifteen years old, and the music from their self-titled album, Paramore resonanes with me just as much as it did back then. The power of this song in particular always seemed to take hold of me when I needed it to. For example, without being too personal, over the last week and a half my mental health has been worsening bit by bit again due to several uncertainties that are sparking issues with my anxiety.

I happened across this song this week because my music player was on shuffle and I was immediately sent back to the first time I truly ever listened to it; I was in Naples on a school trip and my best friend was dozing in the seat next to mine so I opted to listen to music. I tended to skip this song as the introduction was slower than some of the other pieces. But we were in for a long ride so I figured I might as well listen to it fully.

The lyrics had me completely entranced! It was like a state of existentialism to a rthym I couldn't yet predict! The song seemed so well-thought out! I was amazed by the way that the fade in and out was used and the depth of just having a period of silence, as if that was the end of the song but nope BAM more music. Almost as if it was telling the listener that their journey wouldn't end immediately, that fighting for the future is a long battle and it takes a while, you can pause with nothing happening for a while and still be fighting for what you want.

I personally thought it was beautiful.

I still think it's beautiful and for that reason, it went on loop for hours on end so I could just sway along and feel the embrace of "even if you don't think you're doing it, you are, you're making progress", even though I've spent half of the week in bed sick! ((Phsyically and mentally dead since Wednesday...fuuun))

I love this song! I hope you'll give it a listen!


Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!


- Imogen. L. Smiley

Friday, 9 February 2018

9/2/18 - Favourite Character Praise Friday! - Thresh

Today, 9/2/18 is the third instalment the series of posts praising my all-time favourite characters for their quirks and flaws etc. called Favourite Character Praise Friday. I will be sharing these posts every two weeks to gush about fictional characters in a proactive environment. With this segment, I intend to demonstrate what makes characters great so you and I alike can use these facts to improve our characters!

So who is the subject of my third Favourite Character Praise Friday?

Thresh from The Hunger Games, portrayed by Dayo Okeniyi!


Well, for those who do not remember Thresh's character particularly well, he was the male tribute from District Eleven that was drawn to participate in the 74th Annual Hunger Games. In the books, he was regarded to be built like an ox due to working in the fields of his agricultural district. He was the tribute that killed Clove from District Two after she claimed that the career tributes killed Rue, his female companion from District Eleven. He killed Clove by banging a heavy rock against her skull, but decided to spare the life of Katniss Everdeen as she was Rue's ally. 

The following character praise will contain spoilers

So, why is Thresh one of my favourite characters, despite not being a main character? 

It can be inferred that Cato and Thresh are trait-based inverses

Whether of not Suzanne Collins intended to make Cato and Thresh inverses is beside the point as there is plenty of space to delve into this idea; Cato was the last surviving career tribute and murdered Thresh in the books, as opposed to the films when the wolf "muttations" killed him. They were of similar physiques, but Thresh was still bulkier. Cato was broad due to training in the special academy to volunteer for The Hunger Games, and Thresh was built like an ox due to working to help support his family. 

Another point that supported this clever little titbit is how they treated the "innocent bystander"; in Thresh's case, he spared Katniss' life when she had every opportunity to shoot him. However Cato maimed Peeta, who had witnessed Katniss' escape after Glimmer was killed by tracker jackers. Peeta was injured to the level where he ended up having his leg amputated by the Capitol and replaced with a prosthetic. 

Neither man died as a martyr as Rue had done, but that did not matter; it is unlikely that his death would have evoked the same reaction from the masses had he been killed before Rue. 

Suzanne Collins used great subtle images to provide insight into Thresh's life before he was selected for The Hunger Games

In Catching Fire, the second book of the series, Katniss and Peeta embarked on a Victory Tour. On this tour, they visited Thresh's home, District Eleven. And while Katniss' primary focus was on Rue's bereaved family, Thresh's family are acknowledged. His mother and grandmother stood upon a plinth to be acknowledged as grieving over their fallen son. It is presumed by the fact that he was so young, that Thresh was likely to be the primary breadwinner for his small family. This meant then when Peeta offered up a fraction of his and Katniss' winnings to Rue and Thresh's families, their emotional states were due to the fact that their fallen son/grandson's hard work was also being recognised. 

In the film, Thresh's character proved to be a parallel of his district in their responses to Rue's murder. 

In the film, the residents of District Eleven are greatly upset over how Rue was killed by Marvel and how Katniss responded to it; her emotions were genuine and raw and the people could tell that she felt strongly about the loss of her ally, as she reminded her so much of her younger sister. District Eleven's people began to riot at the fall of their female tribute and were sanctioned for it. Thresh, having heard that Katniss and Rue were allies, opted to spare her life as a form of acknowledging that she would not have wanted Rue to die. He said that he was sparing her "just this time" and it was "for Rue". 

Though the connection was subtle, I found that it gave his character a great amount of development. This is because most connections between allies were formed over the idea that a majority had something to gain from wiping out another force. For example, the career tributes stick together for the best odds of survival as they were trained in order to win The Hunger Games, and they only decided to make Peeta their ally so they could find and kill Katniss. Once she was out of the way, Peeta would have been killed too. 

Thresh had no allies in the arena. In the books, he kept to himself, hiding in fields of wheat as that was terrain he would be familiar with. However, despite that, he felt enough kinship with his fellow tribute to keep her ally alive, despite the fact that Katniss could have waited until his back was turned to shoot him. Katniss, however, only really seemed to avoid shooting Thresh in order to keep herself alive as Cato was running in pursuit him anyway, in order to avenge Clove.  

But what does Thresh teach us about writing and how to write minor characters:
  1. Contrasting a "good" character with a more antagonistic force tends to prove interesting as there's room to interpret their similarities and differences on a somewhat level playing field
  2. Small details about a character and their background can prove to give a reader insight into their life prior to the events of the story
  3. When a minor character manages to save the life of the protagonist, there tends to be a stylistic reason why someone so "insignificant" had so much power

Thank you for reading my reasons for loving Thresh! I hope my praise influenced the way you perceive your own characters!
Until next time!
And remember: 
Per Ardua Ad Astra! 
- Imogen. L. Smiley



Tuesday, 6 February 2018

6/2/18 - Happy Tuesday! University Inspired Writing Prompt!

Happy Tuesday! University Inspired Writing Prompt!

Today, 6/2/18, is the next instalment of University Inspired Writing Prompts. Since my first year at university, I have been compiling a collection of writing prompts inspired by my time studying in Derby. I hope that these prompts help you create your own works!

All of these prompts are dialogue based, and are inspired by real conversations I have been part of whilst at university.

Prompt Six: 
"We ordered waaay too much Chinese food. Hey, random guy, I can see you eyeing this up, do you want our special curry?"
"Wait what? Are you sure?"
"Yeah absolutely! We hadn't ordered from there before! We didn't know that food was filling!"

This is inspired by an actual conversations my friends had with an acquaintance of ours whom we actually began speaking to because we offered him our leftover curry! If we hadn't offered him the food, he wouldn't have began talking to us and more importantly OUR FOOD WOULD HAVE GONE TO WASTE!

Hopefully this prompt inspires something - even if it is just a smile
Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!
- Imogen. L. Smiley

Sunday, 4 February 2018

4/2/18 - Song Of The Week Sunday!

Song Of The Week Sunday:

Today, 4/2/18, is the day of the next instalment of Song Of The Week Sunday - where I will be sharing a piece of music that I listened to more than any other during the space of the previous. In this instance, from week beginning 29/1/18 and ending today, 4/2/18, the song I listened to the most was the following:

Young Love by Eli Lieb!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jPba9WJCzE

I chose to select the above song as my Song Of The Week this week as today is the fourth day of LGBT+ History Month, a month used to celebrate the ways in which the LGBT+ community have become established, recognised and prevalent in society. The progress made by the LGBT+ community is immense - fifty-one years ago, we got the partial de-criminalisation of homosexuality, and as much as there's such a long way to go, the LGBT has gone leaps and bounds!

I love this song's lyrics and the video just adds to the amazingness as the representation of two men isn't overstated or depicted as a gimmick; their dynamic is exactly as it would be if the pair had been of the opposite sex! It is such a good song!

Thank you for reading
And remember:
Per Ardua Ad Astra!
- Imogen. L. Smiley